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Art is amazing even if not capturing the ocean horizon well enough - it feels like a tsunami is swooping just behind the monster, which is not particularly bad because it makes the shot even more dramatic. The red logo however is very cheap and uninspiring.

ahmonza responds:

your right about the title. I forgot to add the score scars to the mc body in this cover so as I fix this, I'll tackle the title itself while I'm at at it and reload it.

The picture has a very good vibe. I think it needs more contrast and bright colors in the girl body. Hands, chest, joints, proportions (shoulder/forearm) - wrong anatomically, which isn't that bothering, but could use some revision.

Love this piece of art! The Mantis is an amazing insect - I've bred a female one and have seen the whole process of fertilization, devourment of the male (which is half of the female's size) and egg laying. Interestingly the male was caught in his second visit (poor glutton:)
PM me if you want to send you some pics.

DanielClasquin responds:

Oh please do!

Nice practice - looks good in general, but there are some mistakes. Anatomically her neck is too long - torso/shoulders needs to go up almost to the point where you've drawn the collarbone hole.
I'm not saying that her silhouette is bad - on the contrary - I'm encouraging you to keep it in this sylph-like way and just touch a bit the Sternocleidomastoid muscles connection.
Also in my opinion the shine in the hair has too much ocher.

MelonMia responds:

Thank you for taking your time to tell me! :-) Totally agree with you. :-D

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